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I get that it's a form of poetry, but I think one of the major points in list poetry, as i've done it before, is to either use a rhyming ...

Yet when you came -- I cried until I swollen smiles came to my face cut out the "I" right there...I think that's a type. and "came to" could be ...

The first six lines, it looked like you had worked out a rhyme scheme and you were using great lines, ect. ect. But there still is a chance that things ...

This seemed like it should have a rhyme structured - as in, it didn't appear random in many spaces. This is your poem, rhyme wise: (the first stanza has no ...

I greatly enjoyed the images. In fact, they kept me enrapt in the poem. The first stanza was my favorite. Down, down, down you take it Bold move, but it ...

Ha ha ha. This was a sour start. Your anger fed the poetry well, but I think you lingered on this far too long and basically repeated yourself over and ...

Cold, distanced, unfeeling, and strong; This is what you are. Happy, close, nice, and wise; This is what you are not. This list of adjetives is overworn, repetitive and annoying. ...

The better parts: as I scrawl poetry into empty notebooks (they remain empty) and this apathy welling up inside me is the measure of mere inches between the tip of ...

Well, first of all, this was very good. I don't know if it was very YOU though - as I know you, this sounded a bit forced from your personality. ...

against the wall of lost men and across the floor of broken women. This seems unfinished, almost as if you were starting an idea here and never completed the point. ...

This was a unique style of poetry - I don't nessasarily like the format for this poem, but it works out. Just barely, though. I think this poem would be ...

And that turns us on. I would look for something less...teenager-sounding here. I think that MIGHT be the point, but I can't be sure. So could you just clarify the ...

Where shall I go? I’ve nobody to guide me. Where shall I go? I’ve nobody beside me. Silence closes in around me Take your time All the while the sun ...

You used a lot of awkward repitition: I had one before. But I've known that before But we've had those before. This is too short of a poem to use ...

It looks like we have a new poet on our site, and I happen to love your style. It's catchy, original and every line is full of imagery that makes ...